Does anyone wanna do a art trade? (I'll have examples of my art)

Hello! I wrote my first script for my series "eyeholes" it's in the writing forum but I'll copy paste it here to!

{THIS WOULD MAKE MORE SENSE IF YOU READ THIS https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/randomlye/eyeholes-wip }

(Bluezet): I remember it like it was yesterday..

Bluezet and Ginger walked throught the halls of Blookbrook high-school, talking to eachother.

(Bluezet): I'm so tired of this.. why can they do so much stuff?

(Ginger): ingore them! The system is corrupted..

Bluezet sighed softly before looking at the door with a sign that said '11-1'

(Bluezet): Thanks for everything..

Bluezet smiled before she walked in, while Ginger walked into a room with a sign that said '11-2'

Violet then walked passed that room, mumbling to herself.

(Violet): glad she's happy.

She walked for a while until she went to the room with a sign that said '11-2'. The room was a loud, caotic mess. The teacher wasn't there, as always.

(Viloet): stupid slut isn't even here. What's the point in even going to school if all the cooler color teachers are always out..

Violet mumbled before sitting down at her desk and getting ready to draw before-

(Sage): Um.. hello?

Violet look up from her sketchbook to Sage, confused on who she is.

(Sage): I'm Sage! I'm new what's yours?

Viloet looked away and then looked back at her.

(Viloet): are you talking to me?

(Sage): of course! Who else would I be talking to?

(Viloet): I guess that makes sense, heh. I'm viloet.

(Sage): that's a pretty name! I hate this uniform tho!

Sage giggled with a bit of blush against her face. For the first time in a long time, she felt happy.

Time skip to break

Sage and viloet went into the courtyard after everyone ran out there to eat their lunches and talk. The 2 sat down on a bench and started eating and talking. Violet saw her sister blue talking to someone.

(Sunshine): Blue, y'know you can sit.

bluezet sat down next to Sunshine, blushing slightly.

(Bluezet): we can get into some huge trouble for this!

(Sunshine): who cares! I really like you blue..

Sunshine blushed slightly as bluezet blushed even more before looking away.

(sunshine): as friends of course!

They both started chuckling from the awkwardness.

back to viloet and sage

Viloet was staring at sunshine with love and lustfull eyes. Sage looked at her with confusion as she tapped her shoulder.

(Sage): hey um.. is that allowed here?

sage pointed at sunshine and bluezet, laughing and talking. Viloet snapped out of her gaze.

(Viloet): oh shit no!

Back to bluezet and sunshine

Ginger came along and sat next to bluezet

(Ginger): I hate math!!

(Sunshine and bluezet): me to!!

they looked at eachother and started laughing. After a little while, a finger was tapped on bluezets shoulder. She looked back and saw a mean looking face, Crimson.

(Crimson): ew.. I can't believe I touched a blue..what are you 2 doing!!

Ginger and sunset looked back to Crimson.

(Ginger): fuck off, firecrouch.

(Sunshine): now now we don't need to be hostile. Crimson, let her sit here.

(Crimson): what the fuck are you 2 talking about? she's a BLUE!

(Bluezet): it's fine I'll g-

(Ginger): no blue. You have a right to be here to.

(Crimson): No she doesn't!

Crimson looked over at bluezet with hateful eyes.

(Crimson): move bitch or I will.

Bluezet looked at Ginger and sunshine. They all shook their heads. Crimson scoffed before almost slapping blue. Sunshine took his wrist and squeezed it so tightly it almost bled.

(Sunshine): that's enough.

shelet go of his hand, before he stomped away with anger. They all continued to talk and eat their lunches.

Back to viloet and sage

Viloet and sage looked at the little group in shock and disbelief. Viloet groaned before looking away and rubbing her head.

(Viloet): not again blue..

(Sage): is that your sister?

(Viloet): mmhhhhmm

After lunch + in class

(Announcer): BLUEZET HELSING!! Come to the principles office immediately!!

bluezet groaned before walking to the principles office.

(principle): why hello, Ms Helsing. Take a seat.

bluezet slowly took the broken old seat that was next to the comfortable seat.

(Principle): do you know what your here? Your 16, you know not to sit or barely talk to any of the warmed colors. Let alone make a yellow put her hands on a red.

(Bluezet): yes, I know.

(Principle): this is the problem with you and your cooler colors, you all think your soooo much better!! KNOW YOUR PLACE BLUEZET!!! remember that your a blue, the second lowest color of all. Now sense you don't have any parents, I'll call your orphanage.

Bluezet shook her head, almost crying.

(bluezet): my sister takes care of me. She's old enough.

the principle rolled his eyes before calling Viloet down to the office.

After the talk + school

the 2 walked out of school being tired and stressed out. Viloet sighed.

(viloet): Blue...what what fuck was that!!

(Bluezet): I just wanted to talk and sit with my friends!

(Viloet): don't you know the supremacy of the system?! You almost got kicked out of school!!

bluezet started crying, ballong her eyes out. Viloet sighed before hugging her.

(Viloet): im sorry for that way I've been acting lately...but things will change very soon.

END OF EP 1

Hello!! I feel like I'm not improving on my art for whatever reason. Now please don't be just straight up hating like "ur art sucks lol" or somthing like that